Kyle's Essay

Kyle Sebastian
Professor H. Salsich
English 9
26 February 2009

“Brave New Worlds”;
An Essay On Forgiveness, Acceptance, Contentment, and Unity.

TS: Mankind has many faults and has been the instigator for many terrible things. SD: What would it take to have a perfect world? CM: Forgiveness is the savior of Prospero’s world. CM: There are three simple things that we need to do to save ours.

TS: The main reason everyone can live in peace now is because Prospero forgave all those who wronged him. SD: “To forgive is to set a prisoner free […]” ( Lewis B. Smedes) which is exactly what Prospero did to Antonio. CM: Prospero vindicated Antonio from his deed therefore he was freed from his hate. SD: All the terrible things that Antonio did to Prospero and his daughter are forgiven. CM: Now there is nothing to fight and fuss over so everyone is peaceful and happy. CM: They are all living in peace and jubilation with one another now. SD: Such a saintly act that it amazed those being forgiven. CM: Antonio was astounded that he could be forgiven for such an intolerable thing. CM: He sees how much his brother is willing to forgive him so he feels bad and together the brothers make a reconciliation. CS: Forgiveness is a powerful thing that should not be taken lightly.

TS: To achieve a brave new world we need acceptance, contentment, and unity. SD: We need acceptance so that everyone can be accepted. CM: If people were accepted by other no matter how different they were things would be more peaceful. CM: If everyone was accepted there would be no conflict between two people, they would simply accept each other. SD: Contentment is also needed so everyone in satisfied. CM: If everyone is satisfied then there will be no want, no greed. CM: Therefore no conflict will arise from the greed of man because there will be none. SD: Last, but not least Unity is needed. CM: We need to cooperate with each other to live together in peace. CM: If everyone is united then everyone reaps the benefits of a “Brave New World. CS: These are three simple things that we need for a perfect world, a world where there is no pain, a world where fear is unknown, a world where we can live how we should.

TS: Our world is overflowing with horrible things like war, pollution, corruption, sorrow, and lies. SD: However, with hope from everyone, with faith and help from everyone there isn’t much we have to do to change that. CM: If we can forgive someone who has wronged us in some way, if we can forgive the little things that people do that irritate us, if even we can forgive ourselves from something we have done wrong surely we can do something to save our world like Prospero did his? CM: We need to accept, to be content, and to unify.

Key
Blue-Periodic Sentence
Red-Loose Sentence
Bold-SAT Words